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Script & Story Coverage & Mentoring

Are you looking for honest, constructive, yet positive and encouraging feedback on your script?

Do you want to tell stories with more heart, humor and impact?

 

I’ve been working for Coverfly/Screencraft as a script consultant for over 7 years judging and giving written feedback on scripts from big name writers/filmmakers, to new writers, in LA and around the world, for competitions, production companies and studios.

I'm passionate about getting more heartfelt, humorous and impactful stories out into the world and on the screen. 

WHAT PEOPLE ARE SAYING...

One of my clients called me his “Script therapist” and several of my clients scripts have made it into the finals of big name Hollywood competitions, landed literary agents, and gone into production after edits from my feedback. 

 

"Sarah literally got into my head and clearly saw the intended cause/effect dynamics between all my story and character elements - in a way that no other analyst even came close to understanding."

David Christopher Loya, Renegade Lens Pictures CEO - Filmmaker/Director

“I have used (via coverage and contests) maybe 100 readers, and Sarah and one other, gave the most effective notes:

not too much pandering and a lot of high-end, generous points and tips. Sarah's were the best, though.” 

Chris Colpitts, Nashville Film Festival Screenwriting contest winning Writer

“There are very few people I trust to give me honest, good feedback, Sarah is one of them. ” 

​Jason Walter Vaile, Multi Award winning Writer/Producer, Cephalopod Films 

“Sarah’s metrics match the high quality of her script consultant coverage.

We are absolutely thrilled with her work. Her Writer Rating is flawless!” 

Tom Dever, Head of Writer Success, Coverfly

“...Sarah's analysis really helped my script and inspired me—more than any other coverage, and for this script I have had many over the past 5 years. I endorsed and incorporated most of her suggestions...

I feel confident with the story now and that is mostly thanks to Sarah. 

Anonymous Coverfly Writer/Director/Producer

SCRIPT COVERAGE PACKAGES

Read entire script and written feedback:

1 page of notes

4 pages of notes

CREATIVE CONSULATIONS

20 minute phone/zoom consult

45 minute phone/zoom consult

1 hour phone/zoom consult

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Script Coverage

Write stories with more heart, humor and impact...

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Basic Feature Script Coverage

Feature scripts up to 120 pages.
1-2 pages of feedback & a few in page comments, providing notes on strengths and improvements.
$180AUD

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Detailed Feature Script Coverage

Feature scripts up to 120 pages.
4 pages of feedback including detailed notes on character, plot, structure, dialogue and concept, plus in script comments.
$280AUD

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Basic TV/Shorts Script Coverage

Short scripts up to 36 pages.
1
-2 pages of feedback & a few in page comments, providing notes on strengths and improvements.
$80AUD per script min.

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Detailed TV/Shorts Script Coverage

TV/Short scripts up to 36 pages.
4 pages of feedback including detailed notes on character, plot, structure, dialogue and concept, plus a few in page comments.
$140AUD

Script & Story Consultations

Tell stories with more heart, humor and impact...

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Script Phone Consult (20 min)

20 minute phone/zoom consult discussing strengths and improvements and answering questions on a script I've given feedback on or an idea for a story you'd like to discuss.

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Script Phone Consult (30 Min)

30 minute phone/zoom consult discussing strengths and improvements and answering questions on a script I've given feedback on or an idea for a story you'd like to discuss.

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Short Film/Video or Story Phone Consult

(20 min)

20 minute phone/zoom consult discussing a short film/video you have made (film can be up to 15 minutes) or a story you are planning to write including strengths, improvements, story structure, character and fleshing out the heart and humor.

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Short Film/Video or Story Phone Consult

(45 min)

45 minute phone/zoom consult discussing a short film/video you have made (film can be up to 15 minutes) or or a story you are planning to write including strengths, improvements, story structure, character and fleshing out the heart and humor.

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